Third Draft - Evaluation

We created an entirely new piece from the footage, we included new features :

• We added booming and heartbeat sound effects for the cinematic effect associated in horror movie trailers.
• In a private recording session, we added new voiceovers.
• A total restructure of the plot to add some clarity to the plot of the trailer becuase in earlier feedback, we recieved criticims that the plot involving the motive of the Gas Mask Killer wasn't clearly outlined in the trailer.
• We added a sequence to clear up the plot showing that the group are being picked off, a mobile phone is seen ringing close to the camera while Ade is standing in the foreground, the camera's autofocus helped greatly as it switched the focus from Ade to the phone.
• The draft is relatively rough, but we wanted to see how it worked, after showing it to our classmates it was graded at roughly a level 2/3.