First Draft - Evaluation

The shot sequences followed the conventions of a typical horror genre. We believe that the audience will be able to identify this first draft as belonging to the horror genre. However there is definite room for improvement. We can add more scenes for the final project, mainly more confrontational scenes, bloody scenes and so forth. We included one sole track for the trailer knowing that we would have to include more non-diegetic sounds such as sound effects for the killer. We also noticed that there was a problem with the uploading of the overall draft, it caused the lighting of the shots to be darker than we edited in iMovie. Whether this was a fault of YouTube or our editing stands to be seen but if it is a fault of ours, we shall consider altering the lighting for particular shot sequences.